Today was the pitch to Liam, the presentation can be found here. We gathered a lot of feedback from our ideas. The first idea was preferred as it was more interesting than a poll. However we were asked a lot of questions about it as people were confused about what the idea was. A lot of people seemed to understand what it was when we re-phrased it to sticker book or storybook. We were told that the age range was too low as its hard to imagine a 10 year old telling the app its thoughts on the exhibition. From this we will need to consider the age range more carefully. The poll was also criticised as its too simple.
From the pitch we have decided to change the first timeline idea to a sticker book idea as it sounds better and makes more sense. Now we will be dropping the poll idea and thinking of something more fun and interactive than a poll.